Look at the transitions between paragraphs or between sections. How does he or she make these transitions? What effect do they have on the forward momentum of the piece?
The transitions between paragraphs in this piece are very good. The author does a great job of tying everything up that he wanted to talk about in the current paragraph, but also does a good job of setting up what he is going to talk about in the paragraph to come. By doing this the author keeps the piece going without the reader losing track or interest of what the author is trying to get across.
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